Comments on: Bringing Bread to the House of the Bereaved…for Read Write Poem http://stoneymoss.org/2007/12/10/bringing-bread-to-the-house-of-the-bereavedfor-read-write-poem/ part circus, part conservatory Fri, 30 Jul 2010 02:20:41 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: susan http://stoneymoss.org/2007/12/10/bringing-bread-to-the-house-of-the-bereavedfor-read-write-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-1087 susan Thu, 13 Dec 2007 18:39:00 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/2007/12/10/bringing-bread-to-the-house-of-the-bereavedfor-read-write-poem/#comment-1087 I really like this. Death has been so integral to my experience and food has always been a comfort. I like how you interwine (sp) these. My grandmother is gone, too, and while she couldn't cook, she was big on cleaning and organizing, the freezer stacked reminds me of her. Thanks for the read. I really like this. Death has been so integral to my experience and food has always been a comfort. I like how you interwine (sp) these. My grandmother is gone, too, and while she couldn’t cook, she was big on cleaning and organizing, the freezer stacked reminds me of her. Thanks for the read.

]]> By: dick http://stoneymoss.org/2007/12/10/bringing-bread-to-the-house-of-the-bereavedfor-read-write-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-1072 dick Wed, 12 Dec 2007 21:26:00 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/2007/12/10/bringing-bread-to-the-house-of-the-bereavedfor-read-write-poem/#comment-1072 With the long line enjambment becomes a crucial structural element. In this vivid, dreamlike piece, you meet that challenge very effectively. With the long line enjambment becomes a crucial structural element. In this vivid, dreamlike piece, you meet that challenge very effectively.

]]> By: Rethabile http://stoneymoss.org/2007/12/10/bringing-bread-to-the-house-of-the-bereavedfor-read-write-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-1068 Rethabile Wed, 12 Dec 2007 07:45:00 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/2007/12/10/bringing-bread-to-the-house-of-the-bereavedfor-read-write-poem/#comment-1068 Very nice. A bread-making triumph. I like the spunky images. Very nice. A bread-making triumph. I like the spunky images.

]]> By: Crafty Green Poet http://stoneymoss.org/2007/12/10/bringing-bread-to-the-house-of-the-bereavedfor-read-write-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-1060 Crafty Green Poet Tue, 11 Dec 2007 17:05:00 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/2007/12/10/bringing-bread-to-the-house-of-the-bereavedfor-read-write-poem/#comment-1060 there's such an air of sadness here, the long lines really add to this and add a sense of meditativeness there’s such an air of sadness here, the long lines really add to this and add a sense of meditativeness

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://stoneymoss.org/2007/12/10/bringing-bread-to-the-house-of-the-bereavedfor-read-write-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-1058 gautami tripathy Tue, 11 Dec 2007 13:34:00 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/2007/12/10/bringing-bread-to-the-house-of-the-bereavedfor-read-write-poem/#comment-1058 I do like the longer lines. After American Sentences, these seem very approachable too.<br/><br/>I tried a paradelle:<br/><a HREF="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2007/12/scientifically-insane-paradelle.html" REL="nofollow">scientifically insane</a> I do like the longer lines. After American Sentences, these seem very approachable too.

I tried a paradelle:
scientifically insane

]]> By: paisley http://stoneymoss.org/2007/12/10/bringing-bread-to-the-house-of-the-bereavedfor-read-write-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-1054 paisley Tue, 11 Dec 2007 01:00:00 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/2007/12/10/bringing-bread-to-the-house-of-the-bereavedfor-read-write-poem/#comment-1054 well,, i can say that i was not in any way aware that you would have preferred a shorter line length here,, it seemed to flow nicely... <br/><br/>i love walking in the old cemeteries,, and i feel the potpourri of remembrances is very much as you depict it here..... well,, i can say that i was not in any way aware that you would have preferred a shorter line length here,, it seemed to flow nicely…

i love walking in the old cemeteries,, and i feel the potpourri of remembrances is very much as you depict it here…..

]]> By: Jo http://stoneymoss.org/2007/12/10/bringing-bread-to-the-house-of-the-bereavedfor-read-write-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-1051 Jo Mon, 10 Dec 2007 16:23:00 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/2007/12/10/bringing-bread-to-the-house-of-the-bereavedfor-read-write-poem/#comment-1051 A really fascinating piece, Deb....I think the line length works really well here. A really fascinating piece, Deb….I think the line length works really well here.

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