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NaPoWriMo 4.10 and 11 (deb) Sentences

Apr 12th, 2008
by Deb.

Puppy Sentence:

Puppy grabs a spring dandelion pod, it explodes in his mouth: Ha!

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How WD blows me away:

Shared blogs create diversity: thoughts fragmented odd random brilliance.

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SIghtings…
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One Comment

  1. susan says:
    April 14, 2008 at 8:42 pm

    “it explodes in his mouth”

    Initially, this struck me is cool and then I revisited the word choice, ‘explodes’ and thought is this too strong? Don’t pay me too much mind, I can obsess over word choice.

    Hope you’re having fun with the new puppy.