Comments on: The Fire of Avocado (for TheCoPo) http://stoneymoss.org/2008/07/26/the-fire-of-avocado-for-thecopo/ part circus, part conservatory Thu, 09 Sep 2010 15:44:22 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: christine http://stoneymoss.org/2008/07/26/the-fire-of-avocado-for-thecopo/comment-page-1/#comment-2013 christine Sun, 03 Aug 2008 17:23:00 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/2008/07/26/the-fire-of-avocado-for-thecopo/#comment-2013 Deb, thanks for the shout out. Yo me, you have made the words come alive in your own unique, fire-filled voice. I love it! And the photo of the cut up words is genius. That's really a great way to work on these. I was scratching out all over my paper.<br/><br/>And you're right, they <em>are</em> hard to do. Deb, thanks for the shout out. Yo me, you have made the words come alive in your own unique, fire-filled voice. I love it! And the photo of the cut up words is genius. That’s really a great way to work on these. I was scratching out all over my paper.

And you’re right, they are hard to do.

]]> By: January http://stoneymoss.org/2008/07/26/the-fire-of-avocado-for-thecopo/comment-page-1/#comment-2004 January Sun, 27 Jul 2008 23:18:00 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/2008/07/26/the-fire-of-avocado-for-thecopo/#comment-2004 I like it. Nice job, and I love the title. I like it. Nice job, and I love the title.

]]> By: Dana http://stoneymoss.org/2008/07/26/the-fire-of-avocado-for-thecopo/comment-page-1/#comment-2003 Dana Sat, 26 Jul 2008 21:48:00 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/2008/07/26/the-fire-of-avocado-for-thecopo/#comment-2003 Hey! I used these words, too. Amazing how different all our poems sound, even with the same words. I would not have guessed they originated from the same source(s). Hey! I used these words, too. Amazing how different all our poems sound, even with the same words. I would not have guessed they originated from the same source(s).

]]> By: polkadotwitch http://stoneymoss.org/2008/07/26/the-fire-of-avocado-for-thecopo/comment-page-1/#comment-2002 polkadotwitch Sat, 26 Jul 2008 13:46:00 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/2008/07/26/the-fire-of-avocado-for-thecopo/#comment-2002 if you hadn't told me this was a chop suey piece, i would have believed you wrote it directly b/c it flows so beautifully, especially the first half! <br/><br/>i, too, am anxious for the big reveal of the original pieces. if you hadn’t told me this was a chop suey piece, i would have believed you wrote it directly b/c it flows so beautifully, especially the first half!

i, too, am anxious for the big reveal of the original pieces.

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