Comments on: Dem bones http://stoneymoss.org/2008/08/25/dem-bones/ part circus, part conservatory Thu, 11 Mar 2010 22:14:04 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 By: Dave http://stoneymoss.org/2008/08/25/dem-bones/comment-page-1/#comment-2075 Dave Tue, 26 Aug 2008 02:32:42 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=657#comment-2075 The opening stanza is my favorite. The opening stanza is my favorite.

]]> By: Rethabile http://stoneymoss.org/2008/08/25/dem-bones/comment-page-1/#comment-2070 Rethabile Mon, 25 Aug 2008 20:41:50 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=657#comment-2070 Yeah, I like the "Stop the wastefulness" line a lot, too. Well done.. Yeah, I like the “Stop the wastefulness” line a lot, too. Well done..

]]> By: christine http://stoneymoss.org/2008/08/25/dem-bones/comment-page-1/#comment-2069 christine Mon, 25 Aug 2008 14:10:37 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=657#comment-2069 This poem gets in my bones, one I can return to and read again and again. The language is elevated, yet it slowly gets under the skin, down to the bones. I really like this piece, deb. And I enjoyed the process too. It's eye-opening to travel in another writer's carriage of words. This poem gets in my bones, one I can return to and read again and again. The language is elevated, yet it slowly gets under the skin, down to the bones. I really like this piece, deb.

And I enjoyed the process too. It’s eye-opening to travel in another writer’s carriage of words.

]]> By: Annamari http://stoneymoss.org/2008/08/25/dem-bones/comment-page-1/#comment-2068 Annamari Mon, 25 Aug 2008 13:35:41 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=657#comment-2068 I do not mind it -I love it. I like that the form and rythm of it reminds of a river's flow... Plus I do feel flattered that someone found my skeleton inspiring and gave it a new beauty. Thanks. I do not mind it -I love it.
I like that the form and rythm of it reminds of a river’s flow…
Plus I do feel flattered that someone found my skeleton inspiring and gave it a new beauty. Thanks.

]]> By: Nathan http://stoneymoss.org/2008/08/25/dem-bones/comment-page-1/#comment-2067 Nathan Mon, 25 Aug 2008 13:10:13 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=657#comment-2067 "Stop the wastefulness..." is a great line. I like the sense of movement here, "travel," "meandering," "disappeared," "abandoned." A pleasure to read. “Stop the wastefulness…” is a great line. I like the sense of movement here, “travel,” “meandering,” “disappeared,” “abandoned.” A pleasure to read.

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://stoneymoss.org/2008/08/25/dem-bones/comment-page-1/#comment-2066 gautami tripathy Mon, 25 Aug 2008 12:52:03 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=657#comment-2066 I like the questioning tone. Great way to end it! http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2008/08/paring-it-all-down-to-basics.html BTW, I like your new place too! I like the questioning tone. Great way to end it!

http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2008/08/paring-it-all-down-to-basics.html

BTW, I like your new place too!

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