Comments on: American voyeur* http://stoneymoss.org/2008/09/09/american-vouyer/ part circus, part conservatory Wed, 10 Mar 2010 14:50:01 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 By: dale http://stoneymoss.org/2008/09/09/american-vouyer/comment-page-1/#comment-2145 dale Sat, 13 Sep 2008 17:41:32 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=759#comment-2145 I'm not fond of American sentences, generally, but I like the last a lot, a whole lot. (Is that a typo or intentional, the spelling of "alter"? Either way it works beautifully -- I've always loved that particular homophone.) I’m not fond of American sentences, generally, but I like the last a lot, a whole lot. (Is that a typo or intentional, the spelling of “alter”? Either way it works beautifully — I’ve always loved that particular homophone.)

]]> By: slynne http://stoneymoss.org/2008/09/09/american-vouyer/comment-page-1/#comment-2133 slynne Wed, 10 Sep 2008 05:43:23 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=759#comment-2133 I love this, the second sentence esecially. As a whole it is very powerful I love this, the second sentence esecially. As a whole it is very powerful

]]> By: Annamari http://stoneymoss.org/2008/09/09/american-vouyer/comment-page-1/#comment-2132 Annamari Tue, 09 Sep 2008 23:52:44 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=759#comment-2132 it came out great as they link to each other. it came out great as they link to each other.

]]> By: Regina Clare Jane http://stoneymoss.org/2008/09/09/american-vouyer/comment-page-1/#comment-2131 Regina Clare Jane Tue, 09 Sep 2008 22:59:09 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=759#comment-2131 Oh my- I liked these very much. And I don't know about american sentences... hm... where have I been?! The last one really resonated with me, even though I never knew my grandmothers... it just seems like something she would have done. Oh my- I liked these very much. And I don’t know about american sentences… hm… where have I been?!
The last one really resonated with me, even though I never knew my grandmothers… it just seems like something she would have done.

]]> By: Deb http://stoneymoss.org/2008/09/09/american-vouyer/comment-page-1/#comment-2129 Deb Tue, 09 Sep 2008 15:22:09 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=759#comment-2129 Thanks, guys, for reading. They are dark and foreboding. I like the diorama idea (I can't spell, either). In fact it reminds me of a great writing exercise I might collaborate with you about on PoCo or RWP sometime. Carolee, you are warned! Thanks, guys, for reading. They are dark and foreboding. I like the diorama idea (I can’t spell, either).

In fact it reminds me of a great writing exercise I might collaborate with you about on PoCo or RWP sometime. Carolee, you are warned!

]]> By: carolee http://stoneymoss.org/2008/09/09/american-vouyer/comment-page-1/#comment-2124 carolee Tue, 09 Sep 2008 13:33:26 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=759#comment-2124 deb--it's a great idea to write american sentences (or other poetry related stuff) as a way of further exploring memoir as you write. i read an article about a novelist who creates diarama (i can't spell) and collage on every story she writes to help keep her in the story or to explore new things and find surprises! deb–it’s a great idea to write american sentences (or other poetry related stuff) as a way of further exploring memoir as you write. i read an article about a novelist who creates diarama (i can’t spell) and collage on every story she writes to help keep her in the story or to explore new things and find surprises!

]]> By: dale http://stoneymoss.org/2008/09/09/american-vouyer/comment-page-1/#comment-2123 dale Tue, 09 Sep 2008 04:45:41 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=759#comment-2123 Oh, good heavens! Of course, Stoneymoss changed its address. I wondered why you'd gone so silent lately. Doh. Now to read! Oh, good heavens! Of course, Stoneymoss changed its address. I wondered why you’d gone so silent lately. Doh.

Now to read!

]]> By: susan http://stoneymoss.org/2008/09/09/american-vouyer/comment-page-1/#comment-2121 susan Tue, 09 Sep 2008 01:15:04 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=759#comment-2121 "splattered shed" is not so pretty. Poignant. Like this very much. “splattered shed” is not so pretty. Poignant. Like this very much.

]]> By: christine http://stoneymoss.org/2008/09/09/american-vouyer/comment-page-1/#comment-2120 christine Mon, 08 Sep 2008 23:44:34 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=759#comment-2120 Each sentence is like a snap shot of an evolving nightmare. Made my heart hurt, and scary too. Very well done, deb. Each sentence is like a snap shot of an evolving nightmare. Made my heart hurt, and scary too. Very well done, deb.

]]> By: Nathan http://stoneymoss.org/2008/09/09/american-vouyer/comment-page-1/#comment-2119 Nathan Mon, 08 Sep 2008 21:59:19 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=759#comment-2119 These are so well written, so dark -- almost gothic (not the popculture sense of "goth"). A refreshing sensibility in the American sentence form. These are so well written, so dark — almost gothic (not the popculture sense of “goth”). A refreshing sensibility in the American sentence form.

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