There’s been a reversal,
although not unfortunate.
A rendition that sounds
sweet as it swings to a rusty
harmonic’s saw, harsh
when it faces the crowded field.
Rarefied when viewed from below.
* * *
For Monday Momentile, an idea of PF Anderson and Tiny Doctor. Well, it was the Doc’s, but we said hell yes. Or something like that.
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nice use of the r in your poem. have a great day.
Hi. I am stalking you. You are on my list of 10 people to stalk until I find 10 other people to stalk. I like this collaboration with Patricia. Very nice.
Re: the stalking thing. It just means I am reading and commenting on all of your posts. And that I am watching you at night through the sheer curtains. No worries. It’s all very straightforward.
This smells flash-mobby to me. Kind of. (I don’t have curtains downstairs. Only the TV room & bedrooms. Where privacy is necessary.)
Hi.
It’s not flash-mobby! I promise!
I *like* your sidebar idea! Niiiiiice.
i really like this.
:-0 *waves*
Splendid poem, Deb.
Thanks, Dave.