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lacking focal depth

I’ve been disappointed with my pictures as of late. What I sense as I walk Sport, or wander back and forth to the office, isn’t making itself into the images I expect. Or maybe it is.

It could be these gray days, lack of contrast. It could be my that little camera can’t capture the depth of fall. It could be a general flatness in tone, attitude. Mine, my world.

tree ladder

There are no trees here, they are frames
for froth. Stick-thin girls walk a runway
covered in green animal fur. Five breaking wrists
display their meat on a spit. Or curlicue
letters from some text an acolyte laid
by candle, now musty. Covered by history’s
protective veil, Edward Gorey creatures distill
in gloam. They hide more than I like.

* * *
Love me some Gorey.

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13 Comments

  1. dale says:

    Marvelous, Deb! I wanted to cut n paste the lines I especially liked here, but the whole poem is made of lines I especially like, so I couldn’t do it.

    1. Deb says:

      :-) Thank you, Dale.

  2. I find the same with a lot of my photos at this time of year, the glorious riot of autumnal colours becomes a confusion on the photo.

    1. Deb says:

      It helps to know others have a similar difficulty.

  3. Via Negativa says:

    [...] Stoney Moss There are no trees here, they are frames for froth. Stick-thin girls walk a runway covered in green animal fur. Five breaking wrists display their meat on a spit. —- This entry was posted Tuesday, November 17th, 2009 at 2:50 pm and is filed under Smorgasblog.  Print [...]

  4. Cynthia Short says:

    I think the photo is beautiful and captures you mood (or the other way around) perfectly!

    1. Deb says:

      Yay! Glad it works for you.

  5. this photo is great, its accompanying words too. talk with you later.

    1. Deb says:

      Thank you. :-)

  6. SarahJ says:

    I love the moody photo, and “frames for froth.”
    Much more interesting than all the exploding colors of foliage season.
    smile

  7. Brenda says:

    I love this photograph and your writing… been back a few times. Very finely done.

    1. Deb says:

      Thank you, Brenda!