Stoney Moss

dabble and whatnot, mostly poetry

Outside the First Presbyterian Church in November

Outside the First Presbyterian Church in November
Portland, Oregon

Ginkgoes form an old processional.
Pleased golden paws fulfill their pledge,

a promise to mirror pigment of artful
glass while gray tones echo cut

stone, marching to and from fall mist.
Ancient shapes plaster the sidewalk,

reminders, not pernicious, they once
purveyed a timeless era. Their policy,

these remarkable species, to pave
the ground plane nearly all at once.

Tomorrow no procrastination,
they’ll leave the porous air and ply

their brightness at playing-field level
rather than prickle what’s not broken

blue. If I could sit as still I’d be gone,
too, no posthumous apology, no parade.

golden ginko

“The Ginkgo is a living fossil, with fossils recognisably [sic] related to modern Ginkgo from the Permian, dating back 270 million years.” From the Wikipedia entry.

Based on a Read Write Poem Wordle prompt using quite a few, but not all of the p-words.  (I guess I should tell you which ones, right? Okay: posthumous, processional, plasters, prickle, pernicious, porous, please, procrastinate. I didn’t use seven of the others, but did add a bunch of my own p’s. Or better said, p’s of my own choosing. I don’t own them.)

You want more p’s? Go here (starting Thursday) for this week’s collection from the Read Write Poem community.

Share

38 Comments

  1. is it (nearly) thursday already? sheesh. i can’t get my feet under me!

    i LOVE this line: “If I could sit as still I’d be gone,/ too, ”

    this piece is beautiful, deb. great great writing!

  2. I love how you juxtapose the plant’s heavy and light features with the church’s heavy and light features. I read this juxtaposition as a metaphor for both the seasonal cycles of earthly existence as well as for the deathless life of celestial existence. At the end of the poem, you bring your observations back to your own insight about your own life, to what’s at stake in this poem for you. Very deep and lovely, Deb.

    • You’re a fantastic reader, Therese. Thank you so much for the care you took with my poem. For your kind thoughts.

      I like what you brought out of my poem. A lot.

  3. that church is beautiful. back home (Paintsville, KY) we have a stone church. it was always one my favorite buildings in town. you’ve taken me on a trip down memory lane with your photo. your words are also wonderful, as always. keep up the good work. have a great day.

  4. I like the line(s) rather than prickle what’s not broken…blue, and love the sentiment at the end.
    Your photo is a beauty, the ginkos looking like the other end of summer–forsythia.

  5. The last couplet is my favorite, I think, though there’s a lot of wonderful here.

  6. Hi Deb,

    The photograph is beautiful with the gold against the blue/gray and your words describe them beautifully too. I’m sure everyone loves the last couplet.

  7. I enjoyed how visual this work was, and your use of the p words in the prompt. Excellent write.

    -Nicole

  8. Ginkgos are just spectacular in the fall. Nice piece! I especially like that last line.

    Popped over at Derrick’s suggestion and I’m so glad I did.

  9. As I was reading the poem, I was seeing it in my minds eye. Just a lovely picture.

    Then I scroll down farther and SEE the picture…and it made my joy complete.

  10. Nifty comparison of the mortal and fragile (yet prehistoric) with the man-made and spiritually “immortal.” The tangibly contrasting details of appearance enhance the poem’s ideas about human grace and patience.

  11. You had me right from the first line. Beautiful images.

  12. Great texture and color in the poem – as intense as the image – and satisfying work of storytelling between the two. Very cool!

  13. You’ve written such a wonderful poem about one of my favorite trees. There is something rich in its ancientness and beautiful in those “golden paws” (especially against a rare blue sky in Portland’s November). And the juxtaposition with the church and all that it evokes – marvelous.

    • Thank you, Elizabeth. They are one of my favorites, too. They amaze me on many, many levels. So glad you enjoyed.

  14. The final two lines stopped my breath. Momentarily. Your words reveal the exotic undercurrent of seasons. Beautiful.

  15. I like the earthy undertone. Have not seen a Gingko tree till your picture, such a splendid gold filigree it looks. A worthy nature poem full of subtlety.

  16. The regal, ancient quality you captured was lovely. Even though you didn’t reference the church in the piece, I couldn’t help but compare the cathedral of the trees to the man-made one. Very nice and very subtle…you do that so well!

    • Thank you, Cynthia. Not referring to the church was sub-conscious, although maybe knowing I had an photo was what made me leave it out. Hmm.

  17. Many writers comment on the vivid blue sky in autumn and the yellowness of the leaves of some trees. Certainly the birches in Canada and the ancient ginkgo further south, sere a lasting impression in the mind’s eye that cannot be erased. The richness of the colors blue/yellow remain vivid in our memories through out one’s life. Connecting that vivid imagery to spiritual icons and ancient fossils seems a natural progression. You have crafted a softly flowing poem whose place in my memory will stay with those blue and yellow images. A beautiful piece, Deb! thank you for sharing.

  18. wonderful images…no mention of the church…but you know its there….and with one of my fav trees….thanks for sharing this

  19. Ginkgoes are some of my favorite trees. Their leaves are beautiful in (their) fall, which contrasts nicely with the Christian fall and the more generally human fall of death.