Comments on: Dried Fruit http://stoneymoss.org/2009/12/03/dried-fruit/ part circus, part conservatory Fri, 30 Jul 2010 02:20:41 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Deb http://stoneymoss.org/2009/12/03/dried-fruit/comment-page-1/#comment-5910 Deb Sun, 06 Dec 2009 16:22:55 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=3313#comment-5910 Thanks, Reth! I'm glad you like the sound, too. I work it, but want it to part of the bones of a thing. :-) Thanks, Reth! I’m glad you like the sound, too. I work it, but want it to part of the bones of a thing. :-)

]]> By: Tumblewords http://stoneymoss.org/2009/12/03/dried-fruit/comment-page-1/#comment-5898 Tumblewords Sat, 05 Dec 2009 22:50:55 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=3313#comment-5898 A hugely wonderful poem came in on those short lines. Read with envy! :) A hugely wonderful poem came in on those short lines. Read with envy! :)

]]> By: Rethabile http://stoneymoss.org/2009/12/03/dried-fruit/comment-page-1/#comment-5892 Rethabile Sat, 05 Dec 2009 07:04:38 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=3313#comment-5892 Tee hee hee :-) I also like the other qualities. The sound system works for me. Hide/Hard, Float/Flesh, Absorbed/Body/Any. And it's wonderful in the way I didn't "see" it on the first reading, but only on subsequent ones. Tee hee hee
:-)

I also like the other qualities. The sound system works for me. Hide/Hard, Float/Flesh, Absorbed/Body/Any. And it’s wonderful in the way I didn’t “see” it on the first reading, but only on subsequent ones.

]]> By: Deb http://stoneymoss.org/2009/12/03/dried-fruit/comment-page-1/#comment-5889 Deb Sat, 05 Dec 2009 04:13:02 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=3313#comment-5889 Thanks, every single one of you, for the thoughtful comments on such a brief work. I appreciate it more than I can say. (And Reth. You wonderfully naughty man!) Thanks, every single one of you, for the thoughtful comments on such a brief work. I appreciate it more than I can say.

(And Reth. You wonderfully naughty man!)

]]> By: David Moolten http://stoneymoss.org/2009/12/03/dried-fruit/comment-page-1/#comment-5873 David Moolten Fri, 04 Dec 2009 21:19:53 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=3313#comment-5873 I like the single breath length of this, and the skin-like mystery of the poem itself, which resembles the fruit, and the inner working of the body as well as the heart. I like the single breath length of this, and the skin-like mystery of the poem itself, which resembles the fruit, and the inner working of the body as well as the heart.

]]> By: Dana http://stoneymoss.org/2009/12/03/dried-fruit/comment-page-1/#comment-5871 Dana Fri, 04 Dec 2009 17:11:39 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=3313#comment-5871 I love it! Small responses are good responses. They count. :) I love it! Small responses are good responses. They count. :)

]]> By: Rethabile http://stoneymoss.org/2009/12/03/dried-fruit/comment-page-1/#comment-5868 Rethabile Fri, 04 Dec 2009 13:31:30 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=3313#comment-5868 Thanks, Deb. "Hard gems" -- I like that. Aren't the hard ones the best? Thanks, Deb. “Hard gems” — I like that. Aren’t the hard ones the best?

]]> By: Linda Fraser http://stoneymoss.org/2009/12/03/dried-fruit/comment-page-1/#comment-5867 Linda Fraser Fri, 04 Dec 2009 10:41:07 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=3313#comment-5867 Your poem is very sensual. You could probably resubmit it next week for the sex poem! I enjoyed it, Deb. =D Your poem is very sensual. You could probably resubmit it next week for the sex poem!
I enjoyed it, Deb. =D

]]> By: Ana http://stoneymoss.org/2009/12/03/dried-fruit/comment-page-1/#comment-5865 Ana Fri, 04 Dec 2009 04:23:42 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=3313#comment-5865 flesh and sensuality, definitely pomegranate... flesh and sensuality, definitely pomegranate…

]]> By: James http://stoneymoss.org/2009/12/03/dried-fruit/comment-page-1/#comment-5864 James Thu, 03 Dec 2009 23:52:59 +0000 http://stoneymoss.org/?p=3313#comment-5864 I like the way the 3rd line works in this poem, a gem in itself. I like the way the 3rd line works in this poem, a gem in itself.

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