some say it’s the worst
day of the year
but we can hear the rain
* * *
a river of stones (24)
January 24, 2012
Stoney Moss
dabble and whatnot, mostly poetry
January 24, 2012
some say it’s the worst
day of the year
but we can hear the rain
* * *
January 25, 2012 at 1:28 pm
Subtle stuff going on here… is that rain the source of the dislike at the beginning, and that “but” an inversion? I’m down with that.
January 25, 2012 at 10:11 pm
You’re nice (as always) to notice these stumblings.
I am glad you caught/like/notice the nuance of that “but”… :-)